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Make You Feel My Love: Part 1

Blinking back the tears forming in your (e/c) eyes, you hid the cracking of your voice as best as you could to respond to your friend.

"Yeah, Francis. You go have fun with her, alright? Tell her I said hi."

Listening intently, you heard the grin on his face as he bid you farewell so he could go on a date with his girlfriend. You had been so excited when he called, hoping for him to want to hang out, but he only needed your advice for what to wear.

Taking a shaky breath, you pulled the phone away from your ear, once more resuming Pandora.

The app nearly made you break down.

'When the rain
Is blowing in your face
And the whole world
Is on your case
I could offer you
A warm embrace
To make you feel my love.'

The mournful voice drifted though your speaker and to your ears, causing the tears in your eyes to spill.

'When the evening shadows
And the stars appear
And there is no one there
To dry your tears
I could hold you
For a million years
To make you feel my love.'

You had always been there for the Frenchman, ever since Freshman year of high school when he needed to borrow a pencil in math and decided to turn away from his friends and ask you for one. Every day in math after that he'd need a pencil, so for Christmas you bought him a box of them. He had laughed at the small gift, but never once lost one of those pencils.

'I know you
Haven't made
Your mind up yet
But I would never
Do you wrong
I've known it
From the moment
That we met
No doubt in my mind
Where you belong.'

He still had the box. Six years later, and he still had the box. You had asked him why one day, and he told you that it was special. Smiling, you recalled how when you inquired why it was special, he looked at you as though it was the most idiotic question in the world. He had said it was because they were from you.

'I'd go hungry
I'd go black and blue and
I'd go crawling
Down the avenue
You know there's nothing
That I wouldn't do
To make you feel my love.'

In silence, you listened to the violin play where the voice had once been. You laid out on the sofa where you had been sitting and closed your eyes, wishing to wake up and find that none of this had ever happened. That you had never come into the class late, that you had never picked the seat in the corner next to the blonde teen and his friends, and that you had never given him a single pencil. Because, in a very short time, you fell very, very in love with Francis Bonnefoy.

'The storms are raging
On the rolling sea
And on the highway of regret
The winds of change
Are blowing wild and free
You ain't seen nothing
Like me yet.'


Though she didn't really know it at the time, just as the girl who had stayed by his side since high school slipped into a tear-filled sleep, Francis had his head propped heavily in his hand, listening as his girlfriend yammered on about something he didn't particularly care about. When she stopped for air, he caught the last few notes of a song playing over a radio in the crowded restaurant and immediately thought of the girl who was truely on his mind.

'I could make you happy
Make your dreams come true
Nothing that I wouldn't do
Go to the ends
Of the Earth for you
To make you feel my love
To make you feel my love.'

Part 2: [link]
Look! More music!
I like music! :3

And I'm sick. May stay home from school tomorrow.
This is crap.

Love you all!
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
waah! so sad, but, still good. :)
pinkstar144 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
UGH!!! NEIN!!!!! DX
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ask-Death-The-Kid Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012
(( Aw. ;w; ))
jessluvswriting Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
Francis, you're an idiot. *shakes head*
Anime911OwO Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ok i love this but THIS is why I hate France!
poetryunite Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
*gasp* Am i the only fangirl or what?! :0; I was listening on your side
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Love that song~
Chukairi Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Student General Artist
I never comment on anyone's literature before, but this is so beautiful :icontearfulplz:
Like everyone else's comments, PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER ONE! lol :D
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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