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Don’t Rain on My Parade

You blew a tuft of hair away from your face and listen to Ludwig continue to drone on about whatever his extensive workout for the day was. Thinking about anything but how many laps you’d be running, you stared up at the clouds passing by.

“(F/n)!” you heard a strict German voice snap at you, “Have you even been listening?”

With a cocky grin, you swung your gaze up to Ludwig. “Nope,” you let the ‘p’ pop in the air around you, amused with how the sound made his stern face turn red.

Not amused at all by your smart ass remark, Ludwig blew up at you. “Then I guess you can just run laps instead of listening to me.”

“Aw come on, Luddy!” you groaned at him. Jumping up from your lying position on the ground, you grinned at him.

“Don't tell me not to live, just sit and putter,
Life's candy and the sun's a ball of butter,
Don't bring around a cloud to rain on my parade!”

Feliciano giggled from his spot on the grass next to you and you stuck your tongue out at him, ignoring the increasing color on Ludwig’s face.

“Don't tell me not to fly, I simply got to,
If someone takes a spill, it's me and not you,
Who told you you're allowed to rain on my parade!”

Prancing around until you were behind Ludwig, you tapped him on the shoulder before marching past him until you were between Feli and Kiku, your words extremely punctuated as you sang them.

“I'll march my band out, I'll beat my drum,
And if I'm fanned out, your turn at bat, sir,
At least I didn't fake it, hat, sir.
I guess I didn't make it.”

With a shrug, you skipped around Feliciano and reached down with both hands, grabbing his own and pulling him to his feet.

“But whether I'm the rose of sheer perfection,
A freckle on the nose of life's complexion,
The Cinderella or the shine apple of its eye.”

You smiled at your little Italian friend, causing him to let out a giggle as you skipped away from the small group, shouting over your shoulder instead of putting up with the angry glares that Ludwig was giving you.

“I gotta fly once, I gotta try once,
Only can die once, right, sir?
Ooh, life is juicy, juicy and you see,
I gotta have my bite, sir.”

A quick wink at the group as the stood, dazed, behind you caused Feliciano to snap out of his daze, chasing after you.

“Get ready for me love, 'cause I'm a "comer"
I simply gotta march, my heart's a drummer
Don't bring around the cloud to rain on my parade!”

Feli snatched up your arm, spinning you around. The two of you giggled on your way back to the house, taking the opportunity of Ludwig still being in a daze over your sudden burst into song as a chance to escape. Lowering your voice, you quietly sang the next verse to the Italian on your arm.

“I'm gonna live and live now!
Get what I want, I know how!
One roll for the whole shebang!
One throw that bell will go clang,
Eye on the target and wham,
One shot, one gun shot and bam!
Hey, pay attention, here I am!”

Dropping Feli’s hand, you turned back to face Ludwig, hands planted firmly on your hips.

“I'll march my band out, I will beat my drum,
And if I'm fanned out, your turn at bat, sir,
At least I didn't fake it, hat, sir,
I guess I didn't make it!”

He was regaining his senses. You squeaked and grabbed Feliciano’s soft hand again, laughing as you finished the song, Ludwig’s shouts and growls as your orchestra.

“Get ready for me love, 'cause I'm a "comer"
I simply gotta march, my heart's a drummer
Nobody, no, nobody, is gonna rain on my parade!”

Bursting into painful laughs, you found yourself out of Ludwig’s sight hidden behind a large cement wall used to practice tennis. Sliding against the wall, you clutched at your stomach with tears in your eyes. Managing to hold in your giggles for long enough to look at Feliciano, you say him staring at you with amusement evident in his amber eyes.

Your heart clenched and you swallowed your rancorous laughs.

“F-feli?” you stuttered out as the teen leaned closer to you, firmly pressing his lips to yours.

The kiss was amazing and, when the hyper boy pulled away from you, you were left dazed by the seemingly randomness of the kiss. A relaxed smile was painted on his face as he answered your unasked question.

“Only can die once, right?”


Answer: Never.


How would you guys feel if I started putting more emotional things on here? But, not fanfictions. Like, just me. Talking. Shouting. Crying. Whatever I needed. Is that ok?
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SmileyWizard1234 Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This will happen next time in gym when I'm forced to run laps, and I'll get it on video.
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'll have to see that!
Oriole-of-Silver Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2013  Student Photographer
Awe!!!! I love this song! This is so cute! And I personally would be fine if you started posting more emotional stuff, you can't be happy all the time
MMDHetaliaWallpapers Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This was so cute

And I say go for it. It's your account. If they don't like it, then they don't have to
TheRedGarnet Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
I love it.
To answer your question, a wise friend told me to just do what feels right.
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Alright then. I will.
TheAnswer-FortyTwo Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
In answer to your question in the description: Write whatever you want, it's your deviantart. I'm gonna read it either way. (And hopefully, your other fans will as well)
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks, it's nice to know you guys would read it.
TenshiNoAkasuna Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013
Adorable. Doitsu, Doitsu, don't be that hard, Liebling~
Love it, keep on writing.
In my opinion you should do what you want to. x) Your fans will support you by every step you take. :D
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good to know! Thanks!
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