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Frostbitten: Part 9
Jack FrostxReader

He was back, but of course it wasn’t the right ‘he’.

You stayed up that night, terrified of the prospect of nightmares caused at the hands of Pitch Black. What you didn’t realize is that nightmares become real while you are awake. The shadows in the corner of your room seemed denser than usual, and you watched as they formed the lean and frightening shape of the Boogieman.

“Still alone?” he hummed in that mocking voice of his, “I’d have thought your little playmate would be back by now.”

Swallowing down your external fear, you cringed away from the man. “You should know,” you spat, “He’s after you.”

Pitch’s lips curled up in a sinister smirk. “But if he really cared about you wouldn’t he be here to protect you?” He left the question hanging in the air, smirk growing when he saw you had no answer for him. “Do you really believe that a childish soul like Jack Frost could feel anything serious? He’s just teasing you.” The way he said that word ‘teasing’ sent shivers down your spine.

“Do you even know how he became Jack Frost?” The man clad in black looked at your stupefied expression and had to turn away to hide his prideful smirk. “Of course you don’t.”

You struggled to defend yourself. “I know what I need to know!” you insisted, “Jack will tell me if he wants to!”

“And when do you think that’ll be?” All other expression dropped from your face to make room for the hopeless look of disappointment on your face. There was a sinking feeling in your stomach as you felt your heart be consumed by doubt. The sight made Pitch smile. “The boy is letting me in your home! And he says he’s protecting you?”

Biting your lips together, you held back the fit of tears you knew were coming. No way would you cry in front of the monster before you.

“He’s left you...”

“All alone...”

“With me.”

“Stop it!” you screamed, cutting into the night. Pitch’s expression became a tamer version of it’s earlier anger and mocking and now he only retained that infuriating smirk.

More shadows rose from the ground, licking at the edge of your bed as you shrunk closer to the wall.

Pitch stepped closer. “Poor, poor (F/n). She thought he would keep her safe from the Boogieman.” His words were taunting, daring you to challenge him again. A crushing feeling was consuming you as you felt yourself giving up.

You cringing, squeezing your eyes shut against the shadow’s glowing golden eyes. Over and over you repeated Jack’s name like a mantra that could bring him back. Only, it didn’t. You were still alone with Pitch Black.

“But he’s not here to protect you, dear. No, no,” he tsked and you could sense the shadows growing taller around you, arching like a bird’s cage over your head. The sound of the cage forming filled your ears and you silently pleaded for it to stop.

Then, it was quiet. The shadows of sand had stopped shifting around you and Pitch had stopped talking. Nervously, you opened your eyes, gasping when you saw the gaunt face of Pitch Black taking up your line of sight from beyond dark bars of the cage.

His eyes were narrowed and he examined you carefully. “Tell me, (F/n),” he addressed you, sound most professional in what he was doing though it was still painfully obvious that his only goal was to make you break. You could tell that much by the haunting lit of his voice. “What are you most afraid of?”

“Are you afraid of being all alone with only your thoughts left to consume you?” He was suddenly gone, but quickly reappeared behind you.

You could hear the grating sound of his long fingers sliding against the cage bars. “Maybe you’re afraid that you’ll never be loved.” You cringed again, struggling not to think of the terrible scenarios.

Shuddering, you whispered a desperate plea to the man for him to stop. “Please,” you whispered hoarsely, “Just stop.”

The walls around your cage were very much unlike your room, forming a dark cave around you. Numerous stalactites and stalagmites came to a sharp point in the cave, filling up any and all empty space with their frightening shapes. Pitch stood on the flat ground next to you, hands clasped behind his back.

“Anything for you, dear (F/n),” he hissed, finally leaving you with your nightmares.

Welp. There you go. There's that kidnapping I've been threatening forever.

I wonder what will happen next. Seriously. I have no idea.

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:iconaironfay:
AironFay Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
SOMEONE HAND MY A FRYING PAN!!!!!!! Magnify Pissed   Explosion   Angered 
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Shhhh! It'll be ok!
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*screams internally* THIS IS FREKAING AWESOME!! I can't believe I sopped reading this in the first place! 
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
/)///(\ Thank you, dear. I'm glad you're back to reading it!
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IncognitoMallard Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
asdfgkllhg PWEASE WRITE MORE!!! :D
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm working on it! I just really don't have any time right now...
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:iconincognitomallard:
IncognitoMallard Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's fine~ :) I can be patient ...I think...
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:iconstupidflyingpanda:
StupidFlyingPanda Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013
This is creep. The fears you described are my legitimate fears.
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
As most of my readers know by now, I am psychic. Yet I still cannot spell "psychic". Oops.
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WorldOfMuffins Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
-squeals- Can't wait!
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:iconspelldust101:
SpellDust101 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student General Artist
*Can't wait
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:iconspelldust101:
SpellDust101 Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Vänt Walt for next chapter. This is great! :-)
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Working on it! School just got out so I should have a bit more time to write coming up.
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Okami-Kagome Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013
Happy dance reading 2 updates to this story has made my night. I hope that you will keep going with it, you have yourself quite the story going here.
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I will, don't you worry! I just need a short break so I can work on finals...
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sarpndo Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
eeeps....
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have a plan.
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:iconsarpndo:
sarpndo Featured By Owner May 24, 2013
good
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:iconsaku315:
Saku315 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
plz hurry with the next parts plz!?
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I will, I will.
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:iconfictionlover987:
FictionLover987 Featured By Owner May 24, 2013  Hobbyist
WHEN??!?!???!?!?!??!!?!??!?!?!??!!?!?!?!!!
*dies of paniciness*
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Idk.
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:iconkuratha:
kuratha Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
looove!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!
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Engelmoon Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconengelmoon::iconsaysplz: You do know I'm not afraid of you
:iconrotgpitchplz::iconsaysplz: I do
:iconengelmoon::iconsaysplz: ??
:iconrotgpitchplz::iconsaysplz: Bu who isn't afraid of a dark cave, where you can't get out, trapped with a man who calles himself the Boogieman.
:iconengelmoon::iconsaysplz: ....:icongtfoplz: leave...just leave...*hides in a corner*

it's getting more and more interesting >w<
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you~
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Azoresangel Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O__O My worst fears have come alive!!!! In a cage, alone, with only my paranoid thoughts to keep me company, after a few hours I will truely be insane!!!!

JACK COME SAVE ME AND LUFF ME!!! I NEED YOU!!!!

Amazing as always! I cant wait for the next chapter! But who ever can??? You are such a talented writer!! I wish I had such skills and ideas ...
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh jeez! Thanks so much! The next chapter will be up as soon as I can, just hold on!
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:iconazoresangel:
Azoresangel Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you!!

*Whispers from cage* Please hurry the voices are begining to get louder!!!
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:iconadewdewk:
Adewdewk Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
He's trying to drive me insane!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A little bit, yes.
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:iconadewdewk:
Adewdewk Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
He's being a jerk
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:iconkalliat:
kalliat Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Brilliant! Such vivid emotions you created :'D
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's always my main goal!
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Saphira12702 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
;_; get me away from him
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Soon, my dear.
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Saphira12702 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013
;_;
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:iconoreo644:
Oreo644 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
This is fantastic!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know, right?
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MrsAllenWalker500 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
I can't wait for more :D
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'll work on it as soon as I get the chance!
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:iconmrsallenwalker500:
MrsAllenWalker500 Featured By Owner May 19, 2013
Awesome.
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:iconoriole-of-silver:
Oriole-of-Silver Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Student Photographer
MORE! I really want to punch him! Wonderful as always!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well you won't punch him, per say. Just make his life a little bit hell-ish.
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Oriole-of-Silver Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Student Photographer
Sounds fantastic even so!
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:iconfallingwithoutstyle:
FallingWithoutStyle Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Student Writer
That cruel bastard...
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
What can you do? :/
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FallingWithoutStyle Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Student Writer
Have Jack kick his butt that's what >:I
You know, if... if he was there....
Crap, I can't do anything.
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's alright, because you can annoy Pitch from the safety of your cage now! Look at the bright side~
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FallingWithoutStyle Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Student Writer
You're right!
Hey Piiiiiiiiiiiitch~
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