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Frostbitten: Part 8
Jack FrostxReader

“Jack!” a thickly accented voice called out the moment said guardian stepped out of the rabbit’s hole, “You made it!”

Pressing his thin lips together in an uneasy smile, the boy nodded at the Russian man clad in red.

Noticing his grim expression, North gently rested a giant hand of Jack’s shoulder. “It’s alright, Jack, everything will be fine.”

Light blue eyes downcast, Jack thought of (F/n) alone at her house. “I hope you’re right.”


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You scooted backwards, nearly falling off the back of your bed. “I-I’m not afraid of anything!” you shouted diligently.

The shadowy figure chuckled. “Now we both know that’s a lie,” he told you, golden eyes narrowed and shining with humor. Black sand began forming a tall pile, slightly taller than you. The pile quickly took shape.

“Poor little (F/n),” the man cooed, watching the sand come to life, “He left you here, all alone.”

Eyes widening, you refused to tear your gaze from the sand. Mussed up hair, a thin hoodie, frayed pants, and a knotted shepherd’s crook.

“Jack,” you breathed, stepping closer to the illusion made by the King of Nightmare’s sand.

The silhouette of the man you felt such a deep connection to reached out a hand to you, the sand shifting slightly, and you reached back. It was a trick, you knew that Pitch was just trying to break you. Even still, you stretched for your fingers to brush against the familiar shape’s but, before your fingers could touch, the sand lost it’s shape, falling grain by grain into a pile that collapsed under it’s own weight.

You lunged forward, trying to save the image before it disappeared, but it was already gone. And, in its place, you found yourself in the grip of Pitch Black.

Wrists trapped in one of his gaunt hands, he kept you from breaking free as he jerked you closer to him ever so slightly. He leaned forward, malicious smirk spreading across his gaunt face.

“I think I just found what you fear most,” he sang, “And I am going to use that fear against you and the rest of the guardians until the day where everyone is afraid of the Boogeyman.” He hissed the name, shoving you roughly away.

“I have big plans for you, my dear. I hope you’re ready when I return.”

You landed once more on your bed and watched with strained breaths and wide eyes as the man began to dissolve into the shadows, ghostly pale face and demonic golden eyes the last things to disappear.

“Pleasant dreams, (F/n),” he said crisply before his dreadful laughter echoed throughout the room.

Curling up tightly around a small pillow, you tried to steady your shaky breath, hoping that Jack would come to save you soon, hopefully before the Boogeyman returned, bringing fear and despair with him.

“What are you afraid of?” His words echoed in your mind, clashing against the last words your little house-invader had left you with.

“I’ll be back soon, I promise.”

“He left you here.”

“You left me here.”

“Alone.”


“He’ll be back,” you whispered to yourself, eyes staring emptily at the lamp by your bed, “he promised.”

Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuh!
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 4: [link]
Part 5: [link]
Part 6: [link]
Part 7: [link]
Intermission: [link]
Part 9: [link]
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:iconaironfay:
AironFay Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
AW YE-AH!!!!!

YO GO ME!!!!!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
WHOO!
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IncognitoMallard Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so scary and yet I can't help but laugh because you described Jack as a 'house-invader.' :meow:
Teehee. :iconhurrhurrplz:
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Pfft. What else should I call him.
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:iconincognitomallard:
IncognitoMallard Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:XD: Exactly.
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sarpndo Featured By Owner May 22, 2013
ooh, scary.
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A bit.
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:iconsarpndo:
sarpndo Featured By Owner May 24, 2013
^^
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:iconadewdewk:
Adewdewk Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
Uh-oh, this cannot be good at all!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nope.
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ForeverJACK Featured By Owner May 14, 2013
THIS.....IS AWESOME!!! PITCH YOU B*TCH.......STAY AWAY FROM ME! Can't wait for more, this is awesome shiz! Suspenceful...dun dun duuuu!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:icondundundunplz:
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MrsAllenWalker500 Featured By Owner May 10, 2013
Nice job, I can't wait for the next chapter :D
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Almost done with it~
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:iconmrsallenwalker500:
MrsAllenWalker500 Featured By Owner May 11, 2013
Awesome :D
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:iconirken-violinist:
irken-violinist Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I've been waiting for this for so long! It's such a good story!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, sorry about that. ^^;
Working on the next part right now.
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:iconirken-violinist:
irken-violinist Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
It's alright! And I can't wait!!
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:iconfallingwithoutstyle:
FallingWithoutStyle Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Student Writer
:iconnoguyplz: You can't scare me, Pitch. You're not allowed.
pitch ╯(°-°╯) ---> (╯°□°)╯︵ ɥɔʇıd
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That was clever. He should scare you though. :iconmwahahaplz:
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:iconfallingwithoutstyle:
FallingWithoutStyle Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Student Writer
....Okay, he does DX
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good~
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Engelmoon Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Pitch.... GTF out of my room T__T
:iconpitchblackplz::icongtfoplz:
xDD

dramatic :la: i think this will turn out very interesting for us readers :la:

oh yeah jack?
:iconrotgjackfrostplz: :iconsaysplz:yeah?
you better get back here soon...I think Pitch is gonna kidnapp me/us
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Shoosh. Spoilers. :iconriversongplz:
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:iconengelmoon:
Engelmoon Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol xD

okay, i wont tell anyone ;)
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Azoresangel Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconimadplz: OMG NOOOOOO!!! I HAVE WAITED FOR OVER A MONTH, IF NOT MORE ONLY TO BE GIVEN THIS?!?!?!! *Grabs hold of Pitch's neck* YOU DO NOT SCARE ME!!!! I WILL EAT YOUR SOUL!!!! THEN JACK WILL COME BACK AND LUFF ME AGAIN!!! :iconstabstabstabplz:

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:iconstephencolbertomgplz: :iconcryforeverplz: Nuuuu that cant be it!!!!! :icontuzkiflailplz: GIVE ME MORE GIVE ME MORE GIVE ME MORE!!!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm just gonna...
Walk.

Walk away.
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:iconazoresangel:
Azoresangel Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That would probibly be the best thing to do ....

Sorry I was on a sugar high ... I was trying to stay awake ... to draw ... now I cant sleep ... O_o
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Haha, it's fine. You should probably not do that again, though.
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:iconazoresangel:
Azoresangel Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah ...
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Lassie-C-123 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
pitch........I WILL DESTROY YOU :icontableflipplz:
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Keep up the fighting spirit until next time, you'll need it.
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IndecisiveLyrics Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pitch, you rascal. You never learn, do you? Lol Great chapter! Definitely worth waiting for!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That's good, cause you're going to have to wait a while for the next one.
:iconsuckstobeyouplz:
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IndecisiveLyrics Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol *dramatically* I WILL WAIT A THOUSAND YEARS FOR YOU! I mean- What? XD
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*humming contently*
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:iconindecisivelyrics:
IndecisiveLyrics Featured By Owner May 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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