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Frost Bitten: Part 5
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"My mother," you tried to absorb everything that just happened, "wants to meet you?"

Jack was cheerily oblivious. "Yep!" he told you with a grin, "She seems like a very nice person."

You shot him a withering glare, then threw your head back, rubbing your eyes with a hand. "Nice, right."

Suddenly he was very wary of the situation. "Why? Is she not?"

"Oh no, she's an amazing woman. Best mother ever," you paused before continuing, "She's just- very involved."

His blue eyes widened, "How do you mean?"

Rubbing your temples, you looked at him, "Well-"

The doorbell rang and Jack smiled sheepishly at you, "She said she was dropping by."

Frantically, you stumbled to the door, slipping on a patch of ice but catching yourself on the doorknob just as your mother was turning it. She pushed the door open a crack before your weight stopped her.

A nervous laugh left your lips, "Hey mom! Just a moment, k?"

Slamming the door shut, your (e/c) eyes darted around the room, landing on the ice patches randomly frozen on your floor as well as the mess you neglected to pick up. An audible choking sound escaped your throat and you ran about the living room, picking up everything that didn't belong and throwing them into your room. You skidded back into the living room with an armful of towels that you tossed down onto the ice patches. Jack watched with concerned and frightened eyes as you tripped your way back to the front door. You didn't notice him come up behind you when you opened the door.

Your mother was standing there, only looking slightly annoyed, but it all dissolved when you felt Jack's arms around your waist. Grabbing his arms and attempting to tug them off, you gave her a tight-lipped smile as she stared lovingly at the two of you, thinking you were embracing him back. Finally you shoved him off and stepped forward to hug your mom. She was shorter than you remembered.

"Old woman," you said, not letting go, "You're shrinking."

She slapped your butt as you pulled away, "Am not!" she huffed.

You grinned back at her, "Are too."

Her smile turned warm as she looked at Jack and stuck out a hand, "Hello, I'm (Mom's name)."

"Jack," he grinned, taking her hand and shaking it lightly.

When her eyes met yours again, her grin was devilish. "He's cuter than the guys you usually go after."

"Mom," you groaned, embarrassed as she stepped into your home.

"But what's with his hair?"

"Mom!"

She looked around, then back up at you, "And why are his pants torn?"

You paused and pursed your lips and turned to face the man. "You know? That's a pretty good question."

The two of you turned to face the pale boy, hands on your hips. He backed up, palms turned out to you. "Oh! I haven't told you? It's a funny story, really, you're gonna love it, I just-"

But you never learned why his frayed pants were torn mid-shin because he tripped on the edges of one of the towels, sliding backwards on the ice patch and landed with a solid sounding 'thunk' on the ground.

Laughing, you clutched at your sides. "I told you that was going to happen! Didn't I?"

He glared at you with ice blue eyes as you continued to giggle. Your mother stood by your side, thoroughly confused by what was happening. Jack pulled himself up and dusted off his tan pants. "Yes, yes," he groaned, "You told me."

Wiping a tear from the corner of your eye, you wove your arm through your mother's and pulled her out the front door and down the shoveled streets. The cold nipped at your nose from above the soft (f/c) scarf you grabbed as you left. Your poor mother hadn't even gotten a chance to take of her jacket before you were dragging her back through the snowy town.

After a bit of walking she was skipping down the road with you, excited as a teenage girl as
the two of you reached a small plaza filled with shops. With a wide grin, you looked at her. "Ice cream?"

"Ice cream," she nodded, following you into the small ice cream shop across the parking lot.

You ordered your ice cream, then the two of you took your seats by the window and watched the brightly lit snow from the warmth of inside the shop.

Looking curiously at her ice cream, your mother addressed you. "So," she said, taking a bite of the sugary treat, "Jack."

You played with the napkin dispenser in front of you. "Jack."

With a wicked grin, she put her ice cream down on the counter and turned her whole attention to you. You sighed, placing your own dessert down as well. "What?" you whined, wanting to just eat and leave.

She nudged you, "You know what!"

"I met him in the park yes- the other day and we've been meeting up since then."

There was that grin again, "Has he kissed you?"

Knowing that was coming, you sighed again, "Yes," you told her, truthfully.

A squeal escaped her lips, and she continued to ask you questions about the "beautiful boy living with you," as she put it, until it was dark. Then, she interrogated you the whole walk home about sleeping arrangements.

You groaned, "He stays on the couch, I stay in my bed."

"No! You can't do that!" You gave her a look, causing her to feel the need to explain further, "It's cold out. He's cute. You have a small bed. Snuggle buddies!"

Finally, you reached your front door and gave her a quick peck on the cheek before ducking into your house. She shouted goodnight at you and went back to her car, pulling out and driving to her own home just outside of town.

Relieved to be alone at last you slid down your door, only to be met with the tapping of a bare foot.

Jack Frost List:
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 4: [link]
Part 6: [link]
Part 7: [link]
Intermission: [link]
Part 8: [link]
Part 9: [link]

I think your mom is pretty great, FYI and she acts like my mother, no way!
Sorry for the lack of Jack hehe. Rhymes in this story, but I'm actually just starting the true plot of the series. Oh yeah, I'm thinking out a plot here, instead of just typing as I go.
I plan a kidnapping and everything.
K. Night everyone. Love you all!
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:iconkittycatlover724:
kittycatlover724 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Me: OHHH SORRY JACK .D.
Jack: SORRY DOESN'T WORK!! SNUGGLES DO!! *he hugs meh* XD
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Snuggles work for everything!
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:iconkittycatlover724:
kittycatlover724 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
THEY SURE DDOOO!!
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kimberlyHarris1990 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
lol Jack fellGiggle 
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Dviantae Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
this sounds exactly like my mom!

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vengefulamber Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Dviantae Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013
Llama Emoji 05 (Flower Sparkles) [V1] 
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Pinkiecat101 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Student Artist
Snuggle buddies~ <3
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yus.
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animewolf345 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
My mom would either do what she said or make him sleep with the dogs literally depending what mood she's in lol 
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nice.
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
"It's cold out. He's cute. You have a small bed. Snuggle buddies!"
My mom would make him sleep in the backyard... XD
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, I'm sure most would. That's why I decided to make her like my mother for once~
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Haha your mom must be cool OuO
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
She's pretty great~
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IncognitoMallard Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahahaha :rofl: The mom made me laugh SO hard. X3 'Cause my mom is TOTALLY not like that! XD So I found it funny.
This is great so far!! X)
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you were amused!
Thanks so much!
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IncognitoMallard Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
^u^ You're welcome!
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Forest6654 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...BEST MOM EVER!!!!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yep!
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kiyacookies456 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Man, I wish my mom was this awesome. If my mom saw him, she would give me a good wooping, no matter how old I am. :iconus-xdplz:
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Pfft. Yeah, my mom just likes to make fun of me. It's a totally healthy relationship! :P
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Adewdewk Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
Lol, my mom is awesome.
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yep, yep!
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist
Lol *snuggle buddies!*
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
mom! lol my mom would never do that.
she'd be like: "NWIUEVBASJKDNHFILE DIIIIIEEEE YOU WHITE-HAIRED PUNK FOISHAILKHIFJKDS - wait he's cute - BUT STILL YOU SHALL NOT LIVE WITH MY DAUGHTER HFHFIWDFFBSDJKFBDSIUF"
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Azoresangel Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha, my mom is kinda like that, just not THAT involved.
Awesome job!! YOU ROCK MY SOCKS!!! *Hold ups fluffly blue and purple socks*
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
eheh, mom....
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Pikachu5091 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
I wish my mom was like that... Wait-no way! Meh mom is awesome!! Anyways.. Hold on, I need to get up.. I fell on the floor laughing on the snuggle buddies part.. So.....THIS IS AWESOME!!! I LOVE THIS!!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
My mom IS like that.
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northernsunshine1 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
I laughed at the snuggle buddy's part XD GOD I wish my mom was like that
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danyzta Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012
I love the story so far :3, but the deal is that he lives with me in return of...?
Also, Jack probably had a watch on us (the reader) for quite a while to be so persistent in stay with him ;3 am I right? c:
I actually blushed in the part when hugged me from behind u///u
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
He just lives with you because he's lonely. And super excited that an adult can see him.
Dunno. Maybe...
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danyzta Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2012
Oh is that so? c:
Well that makes sense and is cute. Thank you for clearing that n_n
Jack is so adorable!! u//u
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Wasp-TFP Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Wow O_O Wasp finds this amazing!
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist
Stop referring to yourself in third person
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kuratha Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Of course my mom tells me to sleep with a guy... sounds exactly like her, I have had a huge crush on a blond named jack forever now and she is always asking!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well that's just brilliant. ;)
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kuratha Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
Of course my mom tells me to sleep with a guy... sounds exactly like her, I have had a huge crush on a blond named jack forever now and she is always asking!
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Crystal-Clear-Blue Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
What? H-H-How does my mom see Jack Frost? I find this very amusing...
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Because your mother is amazing and you believe because of her.
Just pretend it works out.
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Crystal-Clear-Blue Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Okay...
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Darkangelof2P Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is me and my friends lol i wish my mom was like that though
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FrostBite98 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
My mom acts just like that .-.
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CorporalCornbread Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish my mother was like that... and I wish I could have Jack!!! :iconpervyjackfrostplz:
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DarkShadowMagik Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
IKR! :D
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Mango--Princess Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your mom's like this? I think we secretly have the same mom!
What? Who said that?
Good job! :iconsmilieplz:
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mega-inferno Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Geeze, my mum would never be as cool as that...
She'd be all like "BOYS?!?!?! Nooooooo way!!" And then like, full on attack him, ninja style, might've been rather amusing, apart from the fact that she's my mum...
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Splashleap Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep!!!!!!!!!!!! :squee:
i loveeeeeeeeeeeeee ittttttt!!!!!!!!!!!! :heart:
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dreaboricua Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
SNUGGLE BUDDIES !
I'm sorry but I am dying of laughter XD
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