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Frost Bitten: Part 4
Jack FrostxReader

It was strange, you recalled, laying against Jack's chest, to think of the way you came to live with the not quite human. He had tricked you, and you had tricked him. And kissing you was only the beginning.

The two of you parted, a stubborn blush evident on his pale face. His dark brows were furrowed with determination. "Please don't leave."

This shocked you. Sure, you didn't know the guy, but he didn't seem like one to beg. "A-alright," you said nervously, hoping that he'd stop acting so randomly so that you'd know how to deal with him.

A bright grin lit his face, "Awesome!" You smiled too, but your teeth chattered in sudden realization of the cold in the ice cave. You rubbed your hands up and down your chilled arms, but that didn't help much. Jack looked sympathetic for a moment, before hope sparked in his pale blue eyes. "I have an deal for you! An actual one this time, not like before."

And so, Jack Frost came home with you. Pretty great story to tell the grandkids, not that they'd believe you. You hardly believed it yourself, the only thing that proved it to be real being when you woke up still on top of the Ice Prince.

Holding your breath, you rolled off of him, shocked with how cold your room had gotten around you. You blamed Jack.

You tugged on a pair of thick, fuzzy socks and skated your way into your kitchen, fixing a bowl of your favorite cereal while in there. Carefully, you leaned against the counter, trying not to slip to the ground while you ate. Swallowing the last spoonful of soggy cereal, you twisted around and placed the bowl in the sink before sliding over to the fridge.

A little huff of frustrated air made you look behind you at Jack.

"I thought we weren't allowed to skate inside," he pouted, white hair messy from sleep.

You laughed and ruffled it more, "No," you corrected, "you're not allowed to skate inside, I don't need to have to clean up melted ice from the floor.

He groaned, "But you wouldn't! The ice won't melt if you let me!"

Trying not to laugh, you looked at the teen, "And how would you expect me to get around?"

Grinning, he scooped you up in his arms and began sliding on more ice as he created it, "I'll just carry you!"

"Put me down right now!" you told Jack, shoving yourself out of his arms and onto the couch. The air whooshed out of your lungs when you made contact with the chair, then again when Jack sat on your stomach.

You began shoving again. "Oh for God's sake! Get off!" He wiggled and you groaned. "Oh my God your butt is so flipping boney! Get. Off!"

With a laugh, he lifted his weight off of you. You gasped in the air, "Sweet, sweet air! I missed you so!" you called out dramatically as Jack sat on the arm of the couch closest to your head. He gazed down at you with those sweet blue eyes and you blushed, looking away.

Smirking, Jack poked your cheek. "(F/n)~" he sang at you.

"What?" You mimicked his tone, not looking away from the fibers of the back of the couch.

You could feel him grinning, "Why won't you look at me?"

Sighing, you stared at one loose thread that bothered you, then groaned. "Because this is so much more interesting."

A loud laugh filled the air and you fought with yourself not to smile. "I'd bet," Jack said, struggling to make his words understandable around his laughter.

Just as you were about to retort, the house phone rang. With wide eyes, you looked at Jack. You could see his plan shining in his eyes as he glanced down at you.

"Jack," your voice was warning, "no!" You lunged at him as he jumped from his spot, just barely brushing your fingers against the soft cotton of his sweatshirt. When you tried to follow, something wrapped around your waist. You grunted, falling back against the couch cushions and examining the ice holding you back.

"Jack!" you screeched as he picked up the phone.

His voice was cheery and smooth as he answered, "Hello?" Grinning, he looked at you, then turned around, holding the phone to his ear. "Yes, this is (F/n)'s house. May I ask who I'm speaking too? Oh!" He craned his neck to look at you and mouthed the words 'It's your mom' to you.

(E/c) eyes widening in panic, you struggled to break the ice while Jack continued to talk to your mother, chatting like they were best friends. Grinning widely at something she said, he chirped a goodbye, then hung up. You sighed. The ice cracked off of you.

The pale boy sat next to you on the couch. "So that was you mother!" he cheered. You buried your face in your palms. "She said 'Hi'." Glaring at him, he continued as if you'd done nothing, "And she wants to meet me."

You groaned. "Shit."

Teehee! I'm so mean to you people.
Next up, MEET THE PARENTS!
Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 3: [link]
Part 5: [link]
Part 6: [link]
Part 7: [link]
Intermission: [link]
Part 8: [link]
Part 9: [link]
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YasaminK Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014
Oh my god Jack I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!! 


Though I would do the same thing if I were in his shoes so I wouldn't blame him. 
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol
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YasaminK Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014
Yeah I'm mean….but it's pretty fun!!!! Try yelling random things into your friend's phone when they're talking to they're parents. The look on their faces…..PRICELESS!!!!!!!!! :happybounce: 
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yes!
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YasaminK Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2014
:D (Big Grin) Dance! 
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AironFay Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
awww no!!!

no no no no no NO NO NO NO NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   (face palms)
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Look, if you're unhappy with the way I portray a character I'm very sorry but please don't continue to leave rude comments on my works that don't actually have anything in them to help me. Until about part 10 of this story I was going off of clips and trailers of the movie. I didn't want to write it until I had actually seen the movie, but I was receiving encouragement from others as well as helpful criticisms so I could improve my portrayal. 
So thank you for commenting, but please don't again unless what you have to say is helpful.
Have a nice day.
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kittycatlover724 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
me: Shit....
Jack: AHH YES!! THE SHIT WORD!! XDD
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Omg.
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:iconkittycatlover724:
kittycatlover724 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
XD
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everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Jack.. I will kill you... GGGHJGHJHGFFVGBN WHY U DO THAT JACK!?!? WHY JACK!?!?!? WHYYYYY!!!!
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Shhhh. It's ok. Caaaaaaalm.
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IncognitoMallard Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, no....but wait...how can they see him? :facepalm: Jack, what has u done????
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Because they believe~s
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IncognitoMallard Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh. That's so cool! :D
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Adewdewk Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
Uh-oh.
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oops.
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StitchedSxEKitten Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
noah jack stahp it noah!!! mmfffuuu dam it jack hwhyyyy???
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Katniss-HP-Twilight Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2013
damnit Jack! lol~
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pie-times-5 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
" You began shoving again. "Oh for God's sake! Get off!" He wiggled and you groaned. "Oh my God your butt is so flipping boney! Get. Off!"

With a laugh, he lifted his weight off of you. You gasped in the air, "Sweet, sweet air! I missed you so!" you called out dramatically as Jack sat on the arm of the couch closest to your head. He gazed down at you with those sweet blue eyes and you blushed, looking away.

Smirking, Jack poked your cheek. "(F/n)~" he sang at you.

"What?" You mimicked his tone, not looking away from the fibers of the back of the couch.

You could feel him grinning, "Why won't you look at me?"

Sighing, you stared at one loose thread that bothered you, then groaned. "Because this is so much more interesting."

A loud laugh filled the air and you fought with yourself not to smile. "I'd bet," Jack said, struggling to make his words understandable around his laughter."
OW!! MY FANGIRL FEELS<3
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And guess what~


I FINALLY SAW THE MOVIE TODAY!
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pie-times-5 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
omgggg <3
was it adorable? :3
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ABSOLUTELY! I was crying!

But I always cry, so nothing new there! :3
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pie-times-5 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
hahaha
WASNT JACK SEXY?
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Dude. Totally sexy.
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pie-times-5 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2013
ikr
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awesomegirl37 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist
Lol the conversations people have about Jack are hilarious
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Azoresangel Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hahahais amazing I just love every second of it!!!

But wait ... how did he talk on the phone?!?! I thought only people who believed in him could see him ... hmm then agian ... wait .... no I dont know ... never mind I shall just read on and shut up!!!
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
It's so cute!
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Pikachu5091 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
You mischievious Ice Prince... But I love you anyway... And that was awesome!
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Wasp-TFP Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Wasp likes *nods*
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XuanXAde Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012
Update .... Please .....................I'm die-ing
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Soon~
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TheMADGrimReaper Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
FFFFFFUUUU--- :iconrageguyplz:
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PerfectPunkAlchemist Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Student Writer
Oh goodness gracious! I love this story already!
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
......... I....could...just.... :iconexplodeplz: SOOOO FREAKIN AWESOME!!!!
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Roozilla13 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ack! Jack you mischievous little Ice Prince you XDDD I can't help but love him.
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Mello-chan91 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
this makes me giggle! Jack's such a goof ball! :iconjackfrost1plz:
:iconbigheartplz:
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CountrygalxHetalia Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh my gosh!!!!! I can't wait till the next part!!!!! I love this!!
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Kazami-Girl Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
omg!!! this is so awesome!!!!! i cant' wait for the next chapter :squee:
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Haha. It's already done. I'm just evil and not posting it until tomorrow.
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Starlightthelugia Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I can't wait for the next chapter!
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animecake12 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
awesome i want to see what happens next
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TheArtistInBoots Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i need this to liveeeeee!!!!
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Engelmoon Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
is there going to be a part 5?
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yep.
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Engelmoon Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool x3
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44mae Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
AHHH!!!! I freakin' love this!!!!
Please update soon~
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vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Working on it! But I just lost a competition with my sister so I have to put it on hold...
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Death5Daughter Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
GASDKJGTSUDGEUEWS
LOVE.
Please tell me your making another one!
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