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Frost Bitten: Part 3
Jack FrostxReader

"Oh my God, Jack! Just sit still for a moment!"

The hyper ice prince paused in his skating around for a second, just long enough for you to get the dishes safely in their cabinet. Walking past him as he began sliding once more on the frozen tiles of your kitchen, you snatched the staff from his hands, not pausing once.

The ice melted. "Hey! (F/n)!" he began his chase after you, bare feet slipping a bit on the smooth tile. You simply ignored him and brought the staff in your room with you, locking the door for good measure.

Jack pounded on the door and groaned, "(F/n)!"

"Go clean something!" you shouted out to him, raising the volume of your music until you couldn't hear him, "And no skating in the house!"

Humming along to the loud music blaring from your stereo, you threw yourself down onto your bed and picked up your sketch pad and pencil, cleaning up your latest sketch.

But, when the song changed to one of your favorites, you hopped up, grinning to yourself. You shouted the lyrics into the air, barely loud enough to be heard over the dominating music, and began to dance energetically to the hypnotising rhythm.

Your (e/c) eyes slid shut and you continued to spin around your room, only slightly shocked and severely ticked to see your indigent little houseguest standing in your doorway, a sly smirk painted on his face and the frosted remains of your lock laying shattered on the floor.

Sighing, you turned the music off, avoiding the chilling gaze of Jack's ice blue eyes.

"You know," you said, your voice holding a hint of warning, "you're going to have to pay me back for that."

The teen took a step closer to you, "Oh yeah?" his voice rumbled lowly, the smirk never fading from his face. He kept coming closer, backing you until your knees hit the edge of your bed. "And, uh," his face was inches away from yours, some of his longer, snowy hairs tickled your forehead, "How, exactly, will I be paying you back?"

Blushing crimson, you looked away from the strange mythical man, but his angled face followed you, eyes shining and dangerous.

Huffing, you pushed him away. "No, Jack, ew. One kiss was enough from you."

The pale boy pouted, and mumbled to himself, "Well I rather enjoyed it."

A sarcastic laugh escaped from your chest, loud and staccato. When you dropped it, you voice was flat, "Of course you did."

There was that wicked grin of his again, "And you did too."

You were already in the doorway, cleaning up the frozen remains of your lock. "No. I didn't."

"Yeah," the boy sauntered closer to you, hands in his hoodie's pocket, "You did."

Shaking your head, you chose to ignore him as you dropped the cold metal onto your desk, unsure whether or not to throw it away.

Jack, in the meanwhile, flopped down on your bed, laying his head on your pillow and stretching his arms above his head before weaving his fingers together under the base of his neck.

Glaring at him, unamused, you nudged his side in an attempt to get him off of your bed. He didn't. Wanting to get back to drawing, you attempted to sit on the edge of your bed, but he just moved closer, making the only room on the other side of the bed.

With a sigh and a light blush, you carefully placed one hand on each side of the man. Thankfully, his ice blue eyes were closed or he would've seen the closeness of your faces. You held your breath, stretching one sweat-clad leg over his body and placing it lightly on the mattress, trying not to alert him of your movements.

Putting more weight on your hands, you managed to pull your other leg up onto the bed. Just as you were about to swing over and get on the open spot of bed, Jack's blue eyes snapped open and he smirked.

"God damn!" you sighed as he lifted his arms from behind his head, wrapping them instead around your neck as he tugged you down onto his chest. Your blush grew, but you wrapped your own arms around his lean waist, listening to his heartbeat while he nuzzled his face in your (h/c) hair.

"I hate you so much," you muttered, hugging him closer to you.

He returned your grip, planting a light kiss on the top of your head, "Yeah. I know."

Part 1: [link]
Part 2: [link]
Part 4: [link]
Part 5: [link]
Part 6: [link]
Part 7: [link]
Intermission: [link]
Part 8: [link]
Part 9: [link]

I'M SORRY! I COULDN'T RESIST!
I think I may just do a bunch of these that are like little glimpses at your life with Jack. Part 4 may be how you came to live with Jack.
Oh yeah, you heard right. Part. Four.
Vier. Sì. Cuartro. Quatre.
Four.
Tee hee! See you guys soon!
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:iconqueen-shadow1029:
queen-shadow1029 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Writer
I really like this version of Jack though. he's more cocky? but this is hilarious
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Ah thanks. I was just going off of what I'd seen in previews and the like. ^^;
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AironFay Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
again!    this   is   NOTHING   like   Jack   Frost!!!!!!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Again, I'm sorry.
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:iconkittycatlover724:
kittycatlover724 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
"i hate you so much." SOUNDS LIKE ME TALKING TO MY MOM XD
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
;D
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:iconkittycatlover724:
kittycatlover724 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
yep XDD
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:iconeverybodydotheflop65:
everybodydotheflop65 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
That last part though XD
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yup~
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:iconincognitomallard:
IncognitoMallard Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
"No skating in the house." :rofl: And the fluff...X3*dies from cuteness*
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:bow:
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:iconadewdewk:
Adewdewk Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
Fluff, fluff everywhere.
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Always.
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:iconadewdewk:
Adewdewk Featured By Owner May 20, 2013
Yes
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:iconmidnight4568:
Midnight4568 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
:iconloveloveplz:
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconsmirkplz:
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:iconsarpndo:
sarpndo Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
hehe. XD
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:iconsonazeshadazelover:
SonazeShadazelover Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The last part was HILARIOUS!!
Maybe because I love to sketch too!
And I'd do the exact same thing.
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:iconwasp-tfp:
Wasp-TFP Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Wasp loves!!!
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:iconxxxamydxxx:
xxxamydxxx Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student Photographer
omg i love this so much haha xx <3
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:iconjay-fruit:
jay-fruit Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Digital Artist
AWWW I CANT CONTAIN MY EMOTIONS ASDMASKLDALSN <333
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Roozilla13 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That is so cute X3 And the best part is I can totally see myself doing that XP
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:iconcrystal-clear-blue:
Crystal-Clear-Blue Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Just when I tried to steal back that kiss from you, you just had to 'disturb/interfere' my actions. (Darnit Jack.)
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yommyjoker56 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student
omg awsome writting
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! Have fun reading part 4!
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:iconthe-phoenix-miya:
The-phoenix-Miya Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Can't wait for th next one
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:iconfunkiestohio66:
FunkiestOhio66 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Oh god I am blushing! XD Can't wait for part four
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:iconwhitemidnightfox:
whitemidnightfox Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Aw this is the Best Jack story that Ive read so far keep up with the great work
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!
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:iconrosapretty:
RosaPretty Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
youknow what reader might hate him but I don't lol
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Its Ok. Reader loves him in part 4. Oops spoilers. ;)
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:iconrosapretty:
RosaPretty Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
lol
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:iconann-rae:
ann-rae Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
awww so cute!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Danke!
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:iconxxbrianna-williamsxx:
Xxbrianna-williamsxX Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
asdfghjkl Jack, marry me? WAIT WE'RE LIVING TOGETHER~ <3
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yus.
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:iconxxbrianna-williamsxx:
Xxbrianna-williamsxX Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
woot~!
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:iconlimegreensharpies:
limegreensharpies Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Artist
This is so good, I CANT WAIT FOR PART FOUR!!!!!!!!!
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Working on it.
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rememberme4ever1 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
I love this. Haha :D You're an amazing writer.
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!
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:iconrememberme4ever1:
rememberme4ever1 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
No prob.
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SnowheartXD Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
fausifhasklfhoadfhasdokfdoa....... i love this....just gahhh
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Good to know~
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:iconconqueror-of-hearts:
Conqueror-of-Hearts Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
And then I quote the McDonalds slogan...

"I'm lovin' it!" ;D

Oh and there's a part 4!? ASDFGHJKL~~~
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It'll be up as soon as I finish it!
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ArthurKirkland123 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
My word! I love this very, very much ♥
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yay!
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HybridRebellion Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Damn Deviant artist fueling my growing obsession with Jack...

(In other words, excellent work :D)
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:iconvengefulamber:
vengefulamber Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks~
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